editor comments

Editor came back regarding Sea Species rewrites. For the second time, an editor has commented that she had problems determining who is the main character. Once I pointed out that Kihhim the community is the main character, got some great comments. It is worrying that I have not portrayed that strongly enough, or perhaps they are quite traditional. Neither is a sci-fi reader. Comments from those of you who have read it would be most welcome.

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